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IN YOUR EYES AUTHOR: Tazno RATING: NC-17 in parts DISCLAIMER: I own nothing but 3 cats & a lot of dust. SUMMARY: Max, Isabel, & Michael returned to Antar shortly after high school graduation...

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Breakfast, anyone? CHAPTER 12 Liz awoke with the same smile on her face she had fallen asleep with. The smile of satisfaction. They had spent hours just laying together absorbing the enormity of what...

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CHAPTER 13 Max carried Maria to the couch & placed her down. Looking worriedly at Liz he said "is she going to be OK?" Liz chuckled. "Max, don't tell me you've forgotten about her drama queen...

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CHAPTER 14 Monday morning came around far too fast for Liz. They had spent Sunday making love in almost every part of the house. Even when they had gone into the garage for some tools they ended up...

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Chapter 15 will be posted in 2 parts- the 2nd one is right after this one. Thanks for your continued encouraging feedback, I appreciate it very much. A few of you had asked about Mr. & Mrs. Evans....

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CHAPTER 15B Max stared at Maria; being a man, he didn't want to delve to deeply into the Pandora's box of his ruminations on his father. So being a man, he simply replied "what?" "You heard me. This...

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OK! Moving right along! We are moving into a small sci-fi-ish section, and I'll warn you, I don't think I write sci-fi very well. If I do a sequel it will be a no sci-fi zone! To answer some quick...

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This was originally 2 parts, I'll post them one after the other. I had Liz tell Max Sr. she'd kill him if something happened to Jr. to demonstrate her bond with her son. I think any parent would feel...

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CHAPTER 17B Max stared back at Nicholas unsure of what to do. He didn't want to give this guy too much information but he also didn't want him anywhere near his mother, especially now that she too was...

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Hip, you said exactly what I wanted to portray- Jr. probably thought Liz was paranoid all his life, now he's understanding. For a smart kid he's pretty dense, huh?! Liz is going to show them all you...

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Go Liz go!! And an homage to The Wizard of Oz... CHAPTER 19 Max hid the rental car behind an overgrowth of bramble bushes. He grabbed Liz's hand and they began to silently climb the rock formation...

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I love that movie "Say Anything". "In Your Eyes" has been my favorite song since the first time I ever heard it. Enter Isabel, in all her Isabellness! CHAPTER 20 The brilliant light emanating from the...

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This chapter ends a little abruptly- I'll try to post the next one after the Superbowl (go Rams!) CHAPTER 21 They returned to the Crashdown and filled Amy and Jim in on what had transpired. Liz...

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Thank you for all of your insightful questions. I wish you guys had read it the first time it was posted, cause you have all raised some great points that I now wish I had adressed. Oh well, that's...

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CHAPTER 23A "I know this is a corny thing to say, but there really is no place like home," Max said to his parents as they pulled into their driveway in Jersey. "Remember that the next time you feel...

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Hello and thanks again! Before big Max moves down, Liz moves on up... CHAPTER 23B NC-17 Later that night while her son was busy packing up his room Liz made her way upstairs. She stood outside the...

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Note at end of chapter. Enjoy! CHAPTER 24 The next few weeks flew by as the end of the University's semester loomed in front of Max and Liz. In between preparing final exams they worked on setting up...

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OK, wedding ceremony is in next chapter, but this one brings them to my favorite place on the earth. If I could live there I would! There are 3 more parts- chapter 26, the wedding; and then chapter 27...

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The Wedding Chapter 26 "Careful Aunt Maria!" Max reached out to steady her as they climbed the steep rock steps up to view Vernal Fall up close. "I swear I think your mother doesn't want me to see her...

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Well, here it is, the final chapter. THANK YOU SO MUCH for your feedback! It meant a lot to me to know that you liked it; but also, if what I wrote made any sense! Like I had said, I wish some of you...

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